• 06 Feb 2010 /  Poetry /  by Zach 11 Comments

    What can we do to change the world?
    We can toil and labor until we’re old.
    We can work towards power, might and wealth,
    to eat like kings, drink to our own health,
    raise an army, conquer the land,
    breed a family with descendants like sand.
    We can pursue our passions, or notoriety,
    or be the butterflies of society.
    We can write to solve life’s mysteries,
    or research and transcribe the histories,
    or quest for knowledge; go to college,
    squander our plunder, all our coinage.
    But what we can do that will have the greatest effect
    is actually the antithesis of what we’d expect.
    Don’t worry, what you need will be provided,
    Your life is not your own, not matter what you’ve decided.
    The last be made first, the first be made less
    In being a servant you will find your success.

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    Posted by Zach @ 1:54 am

11 Responses

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  • Dad Says:

    Very well done, Zach!

  • Marie Says:

    beautiful.

  • Molly Says:

    This makes me happy :)

  • Andrew Says:

    This isn’t inflammatory. Come on, I read this blog to be shocked. You’re letting me down.

    [I liked the poem.]

  • Riley Says:

    Good poem, man. I love it!

    @Andrew: I’m about to drop some stuff here pretty soon that should spark some disk-gaussian.

  • Zach Says:

    How ’bout this, Andrew?

    You are all living lies.
    Everything you do is a guise.
    So give away all your stuff,
    Throw it off the bluff.
    Go be a hermit,
    maybe then you’ll learn it.
    Fast all the time,
    Pray with the fervor of nine,
    Ask God for a sign,
    Then wait all the time.
    Then maybe you’ll get into Heaven.

    Inflammatoy enough? Please argue the biblical accuracy of this poem. :D teehee.

  • Andrew Says:

    ‘That corpse you planted last year in your garden,
    ‘Has it begun to sprout? Will it bloom this year?
    ‘Or has the sudden frost disturbed its bed?
    ‘Oh keep the Dog far hence, that’s friend to men,
    ‘Or with his nails he’ll dig it up again!
    You! Hypocrite reader! My likeness, my brother.

    Argue the Biblical accuracy of that.

    (okay, so I didn’t write that, but that’s just details.)

  • Riley Says:

    @Andrew: Haha nice. We should do a full theological expository breakdown of the poem.

  • Zach Says:

    Andrew! You would quote The Wasteland. Well played.

  • Zach Says:

    Andrew, that quote is obviously about being reborn.

  • Andrew Says:

    All of Eliot is about being reborn. :-)

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